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Click hereI laid her out on the soft moss bed and got down next to her. With her back against my chest and my arm around her waist, I wrapped us in the blanket. The second the sheet reached my chin, I could feel any chills from the water taken away and my body drying.
"That was so beautiful, I've been dreaming of us being intimate like that for years." Serenity purred.
"I just wish I could be immortal like you so that we would have all of eternity to relive that moment." I hummed. Serenity rolled over and brushed her fingertips against the side of my face.
"You can be. All I have to do is think about life without you and the tears that will rise will heal you and restore your youth." She whispered. I clutched her hand and gently kissed it.
"I would fight against Hades himself to keep my youth, just so that you wouldn't have to cry." I murmured with my lips against her hand.
"Besides you promised that you would stay with me." She mused.
"I did and I will make that promise again to convince you that I will always be here to make you happy. By all that I am, I swear to you that you will never be alone." I promised. Serenity smiled and kissed me.
"I love you, Felix of Troy." She whispered.
"And I love you, Serenity of the nymphs." I replied. Then my dearly beloved rolled back over and I wrapped my arm around her, holding her close as we both drifted to sleep.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoGreat story, I love Greek mythology and erotic stories. Both were woven into this story magnificently. Keep up the great work!
Prolonged_Debut10over 12 years ago...but not by much. Your writing skills need a lot of help and quickly.
1. Use Spell Check. Use it often. Especially before you think about submiting a story to Literotica. There are at least thirty-five spelling and grammar mistakes in this story.
2. Please get an editor. He / She will help you with your prose. Heaven and hell knows you need help there, also. (Don't worry about this one. My editor takes me to task every time I send a story to her.)
3. Do not take criticism Personally. It is aimed at making you a better writer!
