All Comments on 'The Freedom of Slavery Ch. 03'

I do like this story and cannot wait for the next chapter.

and so good as to be worthy of publication( even at this early stage)

You to it to a whole new level and I love it.

This story is becomming one of my favorites. Please keep the chapters comming fast and strong! Thank you.

I know I was supposed to rate each story, but I could not stop to do each. I really enjoyed what you have written. Please continue.

I did find a couple of grammatical and spelling errors, but they were easily read over. 9.9 of 10.

is the word that comes to mind w/this story. I haven't read anything like it before, and find it fascinating. I want more!

I know this is your first submission to Lit so congrats on being a published author. I think you are off to a great start and wish you continued success.

I know this starts out sounding similar to a slave to servants, as i have gotten e-mailed comments telling me so, but i assure you it isn't. i have taken a couple of ideas from a few different stories i have enjoyed, and I admire DoctorWolf and her writing, so i wouldn't steal a full idea from any author, let alone someone i think writes an awesome story. I also used some minor elements from Mygypsy's To Love A Stray, mostly that of the ptsd and trauma affecting how a person reacts. the next week i will be busy on vaction, but i will make sure i have a few chapters finished. Thank You all for your comments!

This story just draws you in. Thank you for your creativity. I can't imagine where this will go, but it seems there will be a lot learned all around. Great work.