The Freedom of Slavery Ch. 04

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"Thank you Masters, for everything, and a chance to have babies as well. Do amas really not like being altered so much that they can demand such a high price for it?"

Oh shit, brothers, help this is a slippery slope!!" Gobin practically screamed, but he was able to block Alza from noticing.

"Don't look at me, I am not the doctor brother mine," Jahar replied.

"Alza, we were able to give you such a high price because you are so well-behaved and because you have a skill-set our planet doesn't seem to have. Also, we are going to enjoy some of the benefits from your price, so we thought to even it out with things we will enjoy, such as those bedroom outfits, as well as some things that we will get no benefit from, such as your locket," Lezar said, coming to Gobin's rescue.

"Nice cover brother, but I doubt she will fully buy it," Ilan complimented.

"Also, we want to enjoy your delights in our full forms sometimes, and it will be easier to get you pregnant in our cat forms," Gobin managed to add.

"Wait, you have other forms Master Gobin?"

"Damn good dodge, changing her whole thinking process and covering a gap that she might have used," Kalba commented.

"Yes, when we enter the medical center, you will see our human forms, but because we are all the coloration when we are human, our planet generally stays in their hybrid forms so that we have differences. We only go into our human form when entering a medical center or when we need healing, and that is instinct because fur can hide injuries. In our hybrid form, we are only different from the human form by our outward appearance; we have all the same organ placements and body functions that a human would. We can fully change into our animal halves, and that is our truest form. We aren't like werewolves that need the moon to change, or have to obey the whims of a full moon and must shift because it is full. It is however best if we shift into our animal form once or twice a month to let them roam around and be free," Gobin replied.

"We will be seeing how you do with the altering before we say that you might become like us. If it happens that in giving you a new reproductive system to match our females in turn gives you an animal and hybrid form, then we shall be glad to have her. That is the main reason why amas from other planets are rarely altered, because it has a chance of changing them into one of us," Gobin added.

"I am guessing that that can be painful and have lots of interesting side effects, right Master Gobin?"

"We got so lucky to find such a smart ama. Yes, many things can go wrong, including having only a hybrid form and losing your human form all together. You having an empathic ability is actually a major plus, as you have a higher chance of gaining a cat, and we know you would likely become a cheetah or leopard," Gobin answered.

"Alright Alza, if you want to get your worry-stone, you can ask your questions mentally, but for now we need to get going. We only have a couple of hours before your appointment, as it is now 8ish," Lezar reminded.

"Yes Master Lezar."

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PhantaseaPhantaseaover 11 years ago
Actually

I like it. I have no problems with sex slaves not being treated like dirty cum rags and thrown away... After all, why treat it like crap if you paid for it. I have also read Slave to the Servents. While i quite enjoyed that story I don't see that this is a rip off. How many vampire mate stories have you read that don't walk along similar lines. Or werewolf?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
belly dancing outfit??????

You don't even try to hide the fact that you are ripping off ideas from other stories! And let's be clear - everyone knows you are deleting comments you don't like just to make it look like you have a fan base. Learn to write, get some original ideas, and come back when you can stop ripping off other's hard work. Shame on you!!!!

MissEmMissEmover 12 years ago
I really did try to read but could not go on...

I really did try and read your story - I find your lead male characters quite patronising and inconstant. Your lead female is too complicated and annoying (it's the first time ever I have wanted the lead female to be killed off after the second chapter.)

You want to make her seem strong but the circumstances she came from just got worse as your story progressed; from being physically and sexually abused by her 'boyfriend' to gang rapes and 5 'brutal' terminations - after 10 years of that she would be in therapy (if not a padded cell) for at least the same length of time or life. I'm not surprised she tried to kill herself - if she really wanted to she would have succeeded btw (but good on her for wanting to heal - but doesn't quite succed she puts on a show of living and healing after her ordeal.)

The title needs changing too because she's not being treated like a 'slave' but more like a princess. She's lucky she got brought by a race who look after their females and have the technology who can wipe her horrid past, instead of a race where they would use her for her purpose as a sex slave!! And since when would a sex slave be allowed to breed - they would be useless for their purpose. I have read DoctorWolf's 'Slave to the Servants' and it's far superior to this story but I was hoping to find a similar story with yours... shame because the idea was there but not followed through

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wtf?

You've been given some excellent advice to improve your writing and you've steadfastly ignored it. You need to learn how to write to make your reader feel something, anything other than annoyance. Outta here for good now.

StargodissStargodissover 12 years ago
Amazing!

I just read through from the beginning and this is an amazing story! I can't wait for another chapter! Please hurry!

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