All Comments on 'The Freshman'

Well, it is what it is ... A superficial wanker about a normal guy with the mythical, magical cock. You go dude.

...'Then he bent her over and he spanked her. He spanked her harder than she had ever been spanked before. Twice she cried out but he didn't care. He spanked the big white ass over and over, watching it bounce and jiggle and move and sway and get redder and redder as he smacked it with his large, powerful hands.'..

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What a sick, disgusting and smelly kid .. - Damn 'lover' of beatings ...

Because I want to see where it goes. Work on making it more erotic and fun. To the detractors I say, it is a work of fiction and supposed to be outlandish. If you criticize, be prepared to put your name on your critique and not hide behind anonymous. That is a chickenshit move. I agree, I grow weary of all of these stories with massive Vicks, but it is fantasy and it is the author's right to do as they please. Don't like it, don't read it.

So sick of these nonconsent stories featuring nothing but pretty little innocent white girls, why can't someone do a decent nonconsent story featuring a beautiful black girl ? !

Since when do girls WANT to suck a cock that badly? Very unrealstic!

Its super unrealistic. First she wimpers that he tried to rape her. Then, all of a sudden, she turns into a nympho slut. In 5 seconds flat. You realy should expand on characters personalities, maybe a back story, maybe a kink or fetish for the girl. Right now its like reading some 15 yo fantasies. For real. Ugh.

Well written.

Yo dude love the story you could use some expansion and character development but other than that fucking good story don’t listen to the whiny butt hurt little dick bitches in the comments nice them don’t post their fucking names because they can’t fucking create anything because if they could they put it up here for everyone to judge like they biasedly judge your work but how many of their stories do you see published under the name anonymous none Because they’re fucking cowards they could never create anything like what you have and I only posted anonymous because I don’t have an account on this site because it’s become shit but I hope you keep writing on it because your stuff is good