All Comments on 'The Future of Society Pt. 01'

Where IS the story??

There is no story yet. And not even much in the way of character development.

Setting? Story? Plot? Author warning that this was simply a short prologue?

Lots of grammar errors, changing tenses, etc. Also, either say "9 AM" or "9 in the morning" "9 AM in the morning" is redundant

On accident? Or by accident?

In the first chapter I dont really know what is going on besides just a typical morning routine. What I recommend is hammering out a good and basic plot, then you just write from that outline, but always make sure things match. If character A was in love with Character B and then in the next chapter Character B hated Character A suddenly it wouldn't make any sense. I do think it has a lot of promise and I hope you add to it.