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All Comments on 'The Gardener'

by tontoandponcho

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Unbelievable

Unlikely stuff, poor grammar, stiff writing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Semi-literate

You really need an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Whaaa??

"he decided to take advantage of this externality" What the hell does this mean?

"Does my size intimidate?" Do you speak English or what?

"vast penis" What the hell is a vast penis?

Get an editor or give up writing. It's up to you.

Tw0Cr0wsTw0Cr0wsalmost 9 years ago
dear stupid and raincoat

This is so bad even an editor would not help.

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