by Saucyminx
I loved your story but it cries for a part 2 and perhaps even a part 3.
I cant tell you how sexy you are, your willingness to satisfy, hmmmm. Would love to have a woman make me feel so intense on my birthday, the 14th would never be the same again. You amazing. Cant wait for more sexy!!
Warm Man xx
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Hot story. I liked the dialogue and the way you let us see into what the characters are thinking. In fact, that's what made the story as good as it was, because you actually sort of skimped on the sex description. Once you finally got him in your mouth, you sort of glossed over the details. Not a big deal, and in the context of your story, everything still worked out.
You write so well, I can picture this happening. And it's so hot! Please, keep writing.
I really liked this hot story--left me hard---can't wait for more!
You never cease to amaze me, Minxy baby. You captured the feelings of a novice sub wanting to please her man with the beautiful gift of submission.
I happily run off to read parts 2 and 3 now! :)