All Comments on 'The Girl Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
I'm liking it!

Lot's of potential here, and reasonably written, so I'm looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Confused by bad spelling

I thought she was gathering up her whites (as in laundry), but then realized she was gathering her wits.

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