All Comments on 'The Girl From Work'

This story sounds so real. I like the detail. Very well written. I also liked the surprise ending. I was surprised there is a husband involved.

It might be worthwhile to learn how to spell or at least have an editor check your repeated errors. They really do detract from the story!

The spelling was completely awful it really spoilt the mood and the flow of the story. The ending kind of spoilt it because if its supossed to be a lesbian story why has she made a video for her husband! Why has she even got a husband! 1 more thing is the use of sex toys why did u involve that! If they love each other so much they shouldnt need the help of toys to please each other!