All Comments on 'The Girl I Wanted To Bed Ch. 03'

You need an editor. Especially if English isn't your first language and you are try to construct conversations with vernacular and in the context you have created.

Concept is good. You could clean it up and tweak to improve.

Please hurry and write more

I have been waiting for the progress of Rylan and Jenna's love story on the next chapter. Dont left us hanging for so long. Post the next chapter please

Don't bother starting to read this woman's stories. She doesn't finish them.

1 star to the wanna be civilized non mili human