All Comments on 'The Girl in the Red Cloak Ch. 04'

by peaches07

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Interesting turn of events

I like that she has gotten a little tougher but surprised that that she felt 0 need to heal the baddies.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Time for make-up

Now Lukas has to show Clara that not all Maharian men are rough and callous. He can slowly strip her, then himself, and make gentle love to her. They can explore each others' bodies in a loving and gentle way. She can marvel at the hair on his chest, his muscular body, and the impressive cock she can feel through the pants. And he can explore her curves and beauty too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Please update, this story is incredible

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Great story. Would love to hear more of it!

Any updates?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
more and more please

you stopped at critical time..you need to finish the story or we will go insane.Hilton

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Dont finish the story!

Make it a book! This is so great , I want to read it as a book. Please dont rush to end it, although.... We want more frequent chapters!!!! Love it! Keep going! Great writer here!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
is there more?

You have stopped ay a critical moment.Will there be more.?Please let us know one way or the other.

ScottishTexanScottishTexanalmost 2 years ago

5/5 yet again...Lukas Wullf? A full name possibly? 🤔

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