All Comments on 'The Good Christian Girl'

Little detail, unrealistic even for a fantasy story and why the hell would you nickname the female Ronnie? Such a guys name its more of a boner killer than the writing. If everyone knew of her defilement, the hell was the point of his threat to her? Clearly he would have been arrest. Bad writting and plot holes ruin what could have been interresting

She was still pregnant a year later ROFL Back to E.S.L. for you

He saw her HALF A year later, which is 6 months or the beginning of the third trimester. Instead of author taking English, why don't you go take a human biology class?

@anon: I read it said "half a year later"

Not sure if you misread it or author corrected it minutes after you pointed it out. Either way. Looks fine to me. That said, rp isn't my fav thing to read so I can't give fair critique. But I also won't give any rating cause you did put it in right category as I mentioned it wouldn't be fair of me to rate you poorly.

You missed an entire broken script. Stop jerking while writing

Liking to go after either married women or Christian girls? And adultery and rape you should be shot in the balls for. Very bad story. Nothing good about it one star and if I could make it negative 50 stars I would.

Trash just trash

The hymen is on the opening of the vagina... Not halfway up??

No redeemable characteristic to this story. The story has no protagonist, no character development. There is only a shallow antagonist full of self loathing and having no self awareness.

I suggest meditation, therapy, and a thorough education, or perhaps incarceration.

If you can redo this story as seduction instead, it would be gold.

Not enough Christian girl stories as it is, and the rape thing totally ruins the build up, and throws everything regarding overcoming a challenge out the window.

I really enjoyed it and all those comments moaning about the rape bit, well it's in the non consent section for a reason. I dont read a love story and wonder why there is romance in it.

This could have been better. Instead it was way to rapey. Not good.

Lol author getting shredded by readers!!!!

Don't listen to the haters, this is a perfect story, Christian rape impregnation is the hottest because they have to keep the baby

I agree with those that think the story is a little harsh and very, very predictable. The guy has no finesse. It's like gulping a fine wine right from the bottle instead of really enjoying it. What is the case if you have a Porsche but use it as old pickup truck? I prefer coercion, blackmail, talking into submission, etc. And still would be a non consent story.

Ronnie is a classic short nickname for Veronica, first noticeable in my memory for Veronica Lodge of the classic Archie and Jughead cartoons.

One of many ambiguous male/female names in our culture: Pat, Jo(e), Joey, Kit, Kim, Rory, Alex, Ron(nie), Bill(ie),

Hated it. Chris needs to be in prison.

Chris needs to be prepared to pay child support for 18 years and to go to prison for rape.