All Comments on 'The Good Girl'

Who the he'll likes crap like this?

not a bad story till the top of page 4 then u got totally rediculois

Fuck you! This sucked.

It's a sad story overall, but well written.

I liked it quite a bit. Not sure why it's listed as non consensual though.

Shouldn't be in the noncon tag tho. I look forward to your future work

There is a difference learn what they are and it would make a world of difference to your story. 😉

One of my favorite stories on Lit!

I never read erotica that's made me sad

I would love to read more....love the characters. Maybe they break up and have hot makeup sex!!!!

Fuck. That was emotionally confusing for sure but I'll be damned if it wasn't the best story I've read here. Amazing writing

Don't listen to the haters this is the best kind of story! Please wright another story about Quinn and Jill (and Steve) this was so realistic.

I agree! Give us a sequel that charts the blossoming of Jill and Quins romance as stwve sadly watches/listens on

Sequel please!

I’m hoping that you are Steve! To a point or two this was well written. That point being your own life experience... the other possibility you are Jill. There is a great deal of psych 101 and more in regards evoking passion and hostility in both your characters and readers.

I felt like this story could be real even if its not. The whole story was just so good, youre an amazing writer, insprational!!!

Beautiful story!!!!!! You are a great writer!

well written and sad

perhaps there could be a part 2

I loved this story. Wonderfully written. I feel so bad for Steve though. Please write a sequel where he finds someone who will make him happy. He deserves happiness too!

Considering you gave us the ending early on in the story, I would say at 4 to 4-1/2 inches vs thick at better than 9 in. Steve never had a chance to keep the repressed SLUT. I could have out up with the grammatical mistakes but; no suspense at all. No gun to finish with a flourish. Steve was a wuss to the nth degree. One star for the jerk-off parts.

Of course I felt sorry for him, but so happy for finding "the right one just in time."

Is he the right one? Yes, the big cock definitely makes a difference. Will he really stop screwing around with other some?

She had better really start sexually loving him better and better or else she will end being the one with the empty bed.

Yes, I did really love the story! 5 Stars. A man that screws around is very hard to keep sexually satisfied!

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