All Comments on 'The Good Shepard: New Ending'

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He cheated pure and simple. Afterwards he is also guilty. Should he not pay for playing!!???

Great story and ending.

Wow.yes.

BUT TAKING THE FLOCK WITH HIM IS STRANGE, tk u mlj lv nv

Acceptable honorable, functional, A very nice approach to the problem. Ann could have what she deserved and no more - losing her birthright is a bit much though.

Of course I am as consistent as you my friend -

Despite what our children do with their lives we own them and they remain ours as long as we live. We love them, cherish them, correct them and tolerate them - to a point. We do not HAVE to like them or what they do but they are ours period.

Ann is stupid, amoral for her time even and dishonest at a minimum, she is their daughter for all and ever - their other daughter after this story maybe but still - she is who she is.

S44,

Thanks for sharing on Lit.

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an odd theme for a story.

I liked your ending as well. Excellent story

Very interesting in a late 30's setting - well before your and my time huh.<P>

I really like your innovation and the way you move factually and economically through issues. You mix fantasy, style and life in a respectful way - in most cases. Personally I like you in a more realistic venue - its credible.<P>

Thanks Author - you are appreciated with exception of the odd klinker.<P>

With High Regard

I like yours better too, good job!

Have never seen the film but I like your ending.

Definitely different. Keep writing.

I've never seen the movie but the concept is a neat one. IMO, well (re)written and a well told story. Only critique would be it seemed a bit choppy at points, but I can see where that would happen changing from a movie to a story.

But I do believe this was not the central theme

of the movie! I did like your story though