All Comments on 'The Good Wife'

by NightRAGES

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
A bit too unbelievable

but not too badly written.

dsidedsideabout 20 years ago
Un realistic!

Even a fantasy has to be a little believable.

gnfgnfalmost 20 years ago
Not too bad

for a story about a stakeout. The unbelievable part is that trained police officers would leave a person they are protecting completly alone and go out to eat. The perp is in the room, these guys are supposed to tape the action and arrest the client, so they take off for coffee and a donut. Bad cop, no donut. In this case bad cop, wife gets a facial.

George

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Nicely written ... but

The premise and the set-up was done well enough ... the downfall of this tale, which gives credence to the opinions of others, is that the police would leave the woman without someone watching her. That would seem to be elementary police work, though it might make the writer's job more difficult to maintain the interest of the reader.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
NightRAGES

FUCK YOY

NEVER WRITE AGAIN.

thighsgentlypartingthighsgentlypartingover 6 years ago
Ended to Soon

Thoroughly enjoyed

26thNC26thNCalmost 3 years ago

Author’s usual offering. Just another cheating whore.

Anonymous
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