All Comments on 'The Gray Dove Ch. 01'

I think the characters you're building here are ones I am very much interested in. I look forward to reading more.

Looking forward to read a sequel to this; lets not make us wait long.

The characters are nicely drawn. I'm looking forward to seeing more.

If the coming chapters are as nicely written as this opener, this will prove to be a very good story. (It could have been a bit longer, though.) Good start.

-- KK in Texas

you have done a good job of setting up the framework of the plotline and providing the reader with some of the back story. the character and scene descriptions are good too. I am looking forward to reading more of your writings.

A nice beginning you've go here. I think I like the way everything is described to make it not so harsh on her and reflecting how calm she is about everything in the past.

It would have been justice if later on it turned out Jack had been shooting blanks!

That Damn Jack is a true bastard. To bad Jessie didn't have a Derringer on her.

This beginning has the makings of a great little story. Looking forward to reading the next chapter. Bravos

This is an unexpected storyline development, for a Romance category. I say unexpected, but through the number of years I’ve been on this planet, I have come to know privileged people often disappoint. This is more a “True Life” category. Well done so far! Finn