All Comments on 'The Gray Dove Ch. 01'

This is an unexpected storyline development, for a Romance category. I say unexpected, but through the number of years I’ve been on this planet, I have come to know privileged people often disappoint. This is more a “True Life” category. Well done so far! Finn

This beginning has the makings of a great little story. Looking forward to reading the next chapter. Bravos

That Damn Jack is a true bastard. To bad Jessie didn't have a Derringer on her.

It would have been justice if later on it turned out Jack had been shooting blanks!

A nice beginning you've go here. I think I like the way everything is described to make it not so harsh on her and reflecting how calm she is about everything in the past.

you have done a good job of setting up the framework of the plotline and providing the reader with some of the back story. the character and scene descriptions are good too. I am looking forward to reading more of your writings.

If the coming chapters are as nicely written as this opener, this will prove to be a very good story. (It could have been a bit longer, though.) Good start.

-- KK in Texas

The characters are nicely drawn. I'm looking forward to seeing more.

Looking forward to read a sequel to this; lets not make us wait long.

I think the characters you're building here are ones I am very much interested in. I look forward to reading more.