All Comments on 'The Greatest Humiliation Story Ch. 03'

I've been eagerly refreshing John Knuckles' page for about an hour, boy was I happy to see this! You don't need me to repeat what you already know, that you're a fantastic author, how you build a universe, etc. Thank you so much, this is the best writing I've read for ages, since Rachel Queen was demoted.

Very excellent skill has been demonstrated, from word choice to plot design. I thank you greatly, and hope you will ignore the trolls.

This is great writing. Please do continue with this good work. Excellent scene build up and description.