All Comments on 'The Greatest Humiliation Story Ch. 03'

This is great writing. Please do continue with this good work. Excellent scene build up and description.

Very excellent skill has been demonstrated, from word choice to plot design. I thank you greatly, and hope you will ignore the trolls.

I've been eagerly refreshing John Knuckles' page for about an hour, boy was I happy to see this! You don't need me to repeat what you already know, that you're a fantastic author, how you build a universe, etc. Thank you so much, this is the best writing I've read for ages, since Rachel Queen was demoted.