All Comments on 'The Green-eyed Monster Ch. 01'

This is a story how??...

that was really boring and had nothing to do with the title

I think there were a few good ones in there someplace--This one certainly is not one of them

Read your bio and looked at other stories. One slut wife and two interacial.Can see you are going to fuck up the nice happily married couple.I'll pass.

Excuse me for being a minority vote here. I liked this chapter. I just wish it ended here as an ode to a glorious wife. Alas, I know it would not... BTW, to a previous commenter, giving a pre-emptive vote for yet unwritten chapters; isn't it a bit over the board?

It is in the wrong topic! any idea where stories in here are about? defenitly not this one on one bullshit with her own partner. I hop the next chapter will be....

like to bitch and moan. Don't let it bother you--no matter what you post, it will piss someone off, and he'll be glad to tell you about it. Just keep writing your story, and we'll keep reading it! Thanks, ohio

Looking forward to the next chapters

This whale should be harpooned before subjecting us to more confused writings

Don't know about insecure, but you have to be a real twit to write this about your wife.