All Comments on 'The Gun Sight'

...could have been much better with some help from an editor.

You obviously did your weapons research, but I think you may have overdone it a bit. I felt like I was pummeled with acronyms; I'm sure everything you named was appropriate to the situation, unfortunately it got kind of repetitive and I ended up skimming that. The sex scene, especially, jumped between past and present tense, which was kind of confusing. I think an editor could help you flesh out the characters as well as you did the weapons and situations.

It needs editting but its a good story. Makes me remember the Hammer Slammer stories.