All Comments on 'The Gym'

She chose not to put on bed clothes but ripped hers and his off. Otherwise, I liked it!

Stupid husband. Dumb wife. Dangerous friend. Why should I care for these vacuous characters. If I was her I'd hire some thugs to either rape her husband and his idiot friend, or just shoot them both. As it was written it ultimately was consensual.

Oh by the way if she goes to the police, and every woman should, then when it's revealed that's it's her husband and his best friend, well she takes both of them to the cleaners in civil court and watches them go to jail and become Bubba's or LaBubba's best friend!

All whores. love to be ass raped .

Woulda been better if it had been her husband. And the ending was weak. Good try for someone not interested in the genre.

I agree, didn't like this Dave fella. I was hoping it would be her husband and she would get her own revenge.

But ultimately it's not your fault if it was someone else's fantasy. Other than the ending you have a clean writing style.