All Comments on 'The Gym Receptionist'

I'm sorry but where is the "Mature" in this story?

I think this was miscategorized. Erotic Couplings would have been better. But then, an erotic coupling is never a bad thing....

If 23 is "mature" then we need a Fossil category for me...

Hi all. I can see I made a mistake in the categorization and I apologize. Thanks for pointing it out. I'm sorry!

Are young women really that sure of themselves now to keep hitting on an aloof guy? Seems more a man's fantasy

And even for the young studs of the world after cumming hard in her mouth, there is little probability that he'd be hard enough to immediately get his cock thru her tight sphincter. Definitely fantasy.

However, I think it would have been more interesting as a truly "Mature" story. Tom could be perhaps be 43, instead of 23, and just moved to a new city to start a new job, after being downsized out of his last one. So, he's on a bit of a downer. In rebuilding his life and starting over, he decides to get back in shape by joining a gym, where he is astounded to find himself the object of a late-teen seductress' desires. I could see that continuing for several chapters.

Much better than having Brianna make it with a guy just a few years older than herself.

Of course, that's probably because I'm of the "Mature" category, myself.

And if not that, never a "Fossil", but more like from "the Age of Legends". ;-)

The story was great until you got to the anal part. That turned me off. Some folks like it, I really enjoy other openings too much to go there.

You really need to work on your writing...

Midways through the workout...

how good of shape...

"Will you help me do a few more she asked?"

Etc.

I have to agree with the comments about needing some editing and the comment that this isn't really 'mature' but I don't care. It was hot and steamy and dirty.

I am a fan!

It's been covered, but the writing should be edited. Having said that, there are stories with WAY worse grammar on this site. I can't even finish those stories because the writing is so bad. I enjoyed this story, though. Maybe you could think about writing a sequel with vaginal sex instead of anal?