All Comments on 'The Gypsy's Curse'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
More!

I loved this story! It's very hot and I definitely want to find out what happens to the couple. Can you add some public humiliation to the next chapter? That would make it even hotter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Love it!

Please, continue!

AbsolutelywickedthoughtsAbsolutelywickedthoughtsalmost 9 years ago
THE POSSIBLITIES

I'm enjoying it so far. Where's it going? Looking forward to more.

jlorthiajlorthiaalmost 9 years agoAuthor
I wrote another part to this story.

There is room for more stories from this series after the next one, as long as I get enough interest and or inspiration I am willing to continue this series.

zodrailzodrailalmost 9 years ago
Off to a great start

I love a good curse story, the fact that neither party really knows about the curse is nice layer.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Well...

It needs some work. It's a good premise, but it's full of small mistakes. Slow down next time, and proof read your work more carefully. Some sections seem a little rushed. Despite all that, it's an easy read. Keep writing.

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