by jlorthia
I loved this story! It's very hot and I definitely want to find out what happens to the couple. Can you add some public humiliation to the next chapter? That would make it even hotter!
I'm enjoying it so far. Where's it going? Looking forward to more.
There is room for more stories from this series after the next one, as long as I get enough interest and or inspiration I am willing to continue this series.
I love a good curse story, the fact that neither party really knows about the curse is nice layer.
It needs some work. It's a good premise, but it's full of small mistakes. Slow down next time, and proof read your work more carefully. Some sections seem a little rushed. Despite all that, it's an easy read. Keep writing.