All Comments on 'The Happy Couple TGIF'

For a first submission that was well written, arousing and showed the loving, safe and caring nature of a D/s relationship. I hope you continue this story, have 5 stars to encourage you!

You seem to have hit just the right note here, and, as an introduction to your talent, this has been a joy to read. You really must bring us more - thank you, welcome to Literotica and have five stars from me as well!

All very nicely done but for 'he laughed at her suffering.' A bit of asshattery that broke the mood for me. I do look forward to more from you.

Nothing is sexier than two lovers who know each other so well. Wonderful story!

He laughs at her suffering, what an asshole. If she did that to him he’d bleat.