All Comments on 'The Hard Hit Ch. 02'

carry on .. but this time dont take too much time to post next episode ..... loved it

I wrote almost all of this a month or so after I submitted the first chapter, but then life got hectic and I didn't have time to finish it. I like this kind of mix between thriller and erotica, so I think I'll revisit David and Naomi sometime in the not too far future...

At the end of Chapter 2, David would have known that the hit man's not reporting back would mean the story isn't over... and he needs to tell us what it's like when she's on hormones!

I know it’s been a while since you wrote this but I hope you decide to come back to this story and finish it. Love the way it going