All Comments on 'The Heiress Ch. 02'

I'm sorry, but reading this story is depressing. How someone could do that to a family member is beyond me. I cannot read any more.

It is a dark tale but dont worry, all is right in the end. Appreciate the feedback!

I have never sent comments to a writer at literotica before. You are an excellent writer. Unlike some of the other hacked together stories I have read here, your characters are filled out and they seem real and complex. Forget the sex part, your writing blew me away. I get the feeling you may be a professional, because the tone is familiar...ah well. Too bad I won't get to find out, right?

I am not a professional writer, I just pretend to be. Thanks so much for your comment about my work, it was very encouraging and made my day.

I've enjoyed reading your story. Hoping to see more from you in the near future. Thanks.

Its one of the better ones here. We wait :)

I have to know what becomes of Clara, and of Mark.... I'm hooked! Brilliant piece. I eagerly await the third instalment...

Please give us another episode.

I have only read one other that roughly has this storyline however that one was going to hard core bdsm which I'm not a fan of.... This one has plenty if aspects I would see in non erotic books... A solid plot, suspense, good characters... Don't understand why this hasn't got a 5 rating

Please please add another episode. I am desperate to know what happens to Mark and Clara.

Once again, an abandoned story. Ugh.