All Comments on 'The Heiress Ch. 02'

Once again, an abandoned story. Ugh.

Please please add another episode. I am desperate to know what happens to Mark and Clara.

I have only read one other that roughly has this storyline however that one was going to hard core bdsm which I'm not a fan of.... This one has plenty if aspects I would see in non erotic books... A solid plot, suspense, good characters... Don't understand why this hasn't got a 5 rating

Please give us another episode.

I have to know what becomes of Clara, and of Mark.... I'm hooked! Brilliant piece. I eagerly await the third instalment...

Its one of the better ones here. We wait :)

I've enjoyed reading your story. Hoping to see more from you in the near future. Thanks.

I am not a professional writer, I just pretend to be. Thanks so much for your comment about my work, it was very encouraging and made my day.

I have never sent comments to a writer at literotica before. You are an excellent writer. Unlike some of the other hacked together stories I have read here, your characters are filled out and they seem real and complex. Forget the sex part, your writing blew me away. I get the feeling you may be a professional, because the tone is familiar...ah well. Too bad I won't get to find out, right?

It is a dark tale but dont worry, all is right in the end. Appreciate the feedback!

I'm sorry, but reading this story is depressing. How someone could do that to a family member is beyond me. I cannot read any more.