All Comments on 'The Honey Dew List Ch. 10-12'

This was the kind of read that kept you into it. The confusing part was trying to follow who was whom, and how did they tie in. By the end your had was spinning.

That he has the Ring a Demon can't he make sure all of the Women have his Babies first. Then there has to be Women from work and other places he would want in his Harem.

Sorry, but this is just not working. This isn't a story about a harem or incest. It's just an address book with arrows joining the names. Just a 2 from me and that's mostly for effort rather than skill.