All Comments on 'The Honeymooners'

by Cespenar

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LefreakLefreakabout 12 years ago
Well done

Could be a good start for a interesting serial. Feel free to ad more illustrations then.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Sorry,

A cheat is still a cheat. It may be just their honeymoon, but these marriages are dead. Every woman involved is only interested in herself. Your writing abilities are solid, I just don't care for your plot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
i agree with the previous

why pretend there is a marriage here, there isnt. What happened to the other couples?

to bad it couldnt have been more realistic and explain to all three women they would give birth to demons......... A shame the husbands couldnt have their fantasys after finding out the women were common sluts and see them slowly peeled of their flesh then roasted alive over a fire.

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