All Comments on 'The Hostage'

your hero instead of pieces of shit? I guess you write what you know.

hummmm, got'a have a bad guy to need a hostage, and cream buffs don't take charge. but your also right, a few of us nice guys like to spank a nice ass now and then, lol

I wanted to hear how you two got along, alone holed up in the bush.

Hermann Littmann

kind of short. has potential.

Hot but a little hurried. The notion of breaking her into a slave captured my interest though. I'd definitely like to read more.

But needs more chapters with more details. There's potential for this to be a good series.

I enjoyed this story and I hope you will continue to add to it. You did very well with it. Keep up the good work.

i just think a second or third part might be a good idea.

Pretty please continue this story. One of the best I have read on her.

I liked it! Keep it up :) And I like that it was a short installment. The perfect tease, great foreplay. Now for the orgasm....