by LordDragonFire
I love the development of the story and the video by Melody. - Assume this is to provide scope for Hannah to serve 2 masters,
I hope that there will be a chapter 2.
I like this introduction.
However I believe chapters 2+3 in your story are identical. Maybe a copy&paste mistake from editing?
I really enjoyed the story but it seems lie there was a chapter that repeated itself.
I've submitted an edit that fixes the chapter 2/3 duplication.
I'm glad everyone is enjoying this story so much.
anything I've ever written...and there's no sex yet! Reminds me of Lindsay Welsh's stuff from the 1990s. And you don't point things out, you present them. Like when Melody takes the panties we know Hannah's in agony, but when Mel says "They're soaked" THAT'S when we know how turned on Hannah is.
It's à very delicious story you write it very well. I wait the following part with envy
First thinga first, Concepts of the story is great. Ordering her to do slutty is mind-blowing, some girls likes treated to this way is awe. Characteristics of members is well detailed. Simply put it, u made me wanking at work.
Im intrigued by office relationships stories and this one is very spicy. Please continue. Can't wait to read more
Sad that there is no more than 2 chapters. Those were fun to read.
Then read comments about a 3rd. Where did it go? Pulled or lost in the depths of the Lit IT? Are there more to come? Yes, please!