All Comments on 'The Ice-Breaker Ch. 02'

Mugsy, You've out done yourself with this chapter! That bathroom scene was H.O.T.!!! And I will never be able to look at my son's x-box the same way ever again, I will always be thinking about Alex watching Kait play and him helping her! Looking forward to more chapters soon! Great job!!!!!!

Title says it all one of the best i have ever read and i could read all about these hunky hockey players all day long!!!!

One of the best ice stories so far..You are incredible! Thanks!

since things got so hot. ;) Good stuff. Looking forward to the rest -- I love a happy ending. Oops, did I give something away? ;)

Well written, good flow. Keep it coming. Thanks

Mugsy-You are fantastic. I absolutenly love your stories and this chapter was VERY hot!!!!! Keep them coming, please:)

Mugsy, I am so happy that you have decided to share this story with us. I love them ALL, and have read them all at least 2x. This one actually had my heart speeding up! LOL Between you and PennLady, my DH is a very happy man ;-). Thank you again!

Thank you for this hot, hot second chapter - and it went up so quickly! What a great read! Can't wait for more!

I think this is my favorite story yet! I didn't want this chapter to end because then I will have to wait for more! Please continue to write and I LOVE the hockey players!

I love this story. And I love how he calls her gorgeous, it's such a sweet endearment. "Babe" and "Baby" are so common but "Gorgeous" ... it's just dreamy, I love it. This story is absolutely wonderful!!!

As always, another great chapter. I really like how you give your characters very different personalities and quirks. I like that this leading lady doesn't need an "extra hand" to go over the top, like some of the past leading ladies. These girls sure do blush a lot! Also, lots of sucking on pulse points.... something I had never considered before. Interesting. Keep up the great work!!!

Fantastic story wasn't till i got to the end i realised how fast my heart was thumping and how my breathing had sped up!! Was extremly erotic reading!

I love the hockey stories - especially the ones about my fave pens players.

Thanks Mugsy keep em coming please xxx

The Xbox scene is probably the best sex scene I have ever read.

I loved it. All of it. Perfect.

I just don't even know where to start. I was supposed to go to bed an hour ago and instead I'm getting all excited reading your stories. Totally worth it. :) LOVE the Hockey players.

12. The Ice-Breaker (AP and Kaitlyn):

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-ice-breaker-ch-03