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All Comments on 'The Ice Princess'

by Sean Renaud

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Needs work

The setup is promising, but the story is underdeveloped.

Blackthorn1Blackthorn1over 10 years ago
More please

This story ends far too abruptly, and just feels unfinished.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Too short.

Needs more detail. The end kind of chops the story off at the knees. Also mentioning the story at the end was confusing. More expansion=4-5 stars!

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