All Comments on 'The Imperfect Storm Ch. 02'

very very good

more please

that was great!!! I hope your not going to wait almost another yr to bring out another chapter.. I wont hold my breath, but please continue with getting those bitches and his sister all together.

Now that Sis & the Sister Bitches are getting involved maybe he can get Sis Pregnant and keep Dick away from sis's pussy since he seems to be a Prude. and while he is doing that Wedding Bells for Whitney with Melissa and Stacy following the Honeymooners.

I'm on the edge of my seat. Please don't delay the next chapter.

Thank you,

ansdguy

"Oh baby! You see that? You want me to suck that finger too? You do, don't you..." and she did, sucked her finger that was in her ass."

Yeah, that's not hot. It's not sexy either. It's fucking disgusting and the bile arose in my throat. 😤 So you lost a point there and again when he forced her to suck his dick after he got it dirty inside of her ass. You can always claim, its harmless fiction. It wasn't real. But fiction is the gateway.

It's truly sad that you mixed the scat in with the truly erotic and sexy stuff like Whitney loving the taste of her own pussy juices. It's just like mixing black paint with white and getting an awful shade of gray. 3/5