by AmandaSwallows
Very well written, and nice to see something new! A good departure from "I picked up the most BEAUTIFUL girl and then when we got home she had a PENIS!?!?" that gets done so much.
But this was so badly written and the characters were so ugly that I can't do anything but shake my head and move on from this garbage. It was truly a waste of time to read.
Ignore the anonymous naysayers. You did well with this sequel to Fallen.
I really love both of these stories and rated them both 5/5, but this one is even better than Fallen in my opinion.
you should have put that in erotic horrors ,I almost stopped reading .but the you caught my interest ,.very good