All Comments on 'The Incubus'

by AmandaSwallows

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wildassmikeywildassmikeyabout 7 years ago
that was so funny

you should have put that in erotic horrors ,I almost stopped reading .but the you caught my interest ,.very good

TheGuyInBlackTheGuyInBlackabout 8 years ago
Excellent, even better than Fallen

I really love both of these stories and rated them both 5/5, but this one is even better than Fallen in my opinion.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
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SouthernPassion53SouthernPassion53about 8 years ago
Excellent follow on story to Fallen.

Ignore the anonymous naysayers. You did well with this sequel to Fallen.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Wow

Great story. Really enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
I'd like to complement your imagination

But this was so badly written and the characters were so ugly that I can't do anything but shake my head and move on from this garbage. It was truly a waste of time to read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Very well written, and nice to see something new! A good departure from "I picked up the most BEAUTIFUL girl and then when we got home she had a PENIS!?!?" that gets done so much.

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