All Comments on 'The Informal Bachelor Party'

short

Cut out some of that character development and plot. See if you can get it down to one paragraph.

Why submit something so short? Do you have ADD? Or were you on a laptop whose battery had only 20 minutes life left? Maybe you should try porno Haiku?

It was a short but tasty little tale.

I loved the add comment! :)

A very old whorewife story, just as bad fifteen years ago.