All Comments on 'The Initiation of Kiley'

I quite enjoyed this story!

You just need to iron out a few spelling mistakes here and there (glans vs. glands, tail vs. tale). I don't think I saw any grammatical errors.

I'd be interested to see what else is in store for Kiley, Quaroth, and Salyna's role in all this.

Congrats on a great first submission!

I hope you have a follow-up to this story.

My imagination has dreamed of being immortal for as long as I can remember. Who knew huge orgasmic sex ,even if it meant being a Demon, was the way to go. Kiley was a very smart woman with a plan. Great story!!

Loved it! Definitely one of my new favorites...