All Comments on 'The Interrogation Ch. 1'

by casper33

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
POV distracting

Read the last sentence of the chapter to see the problem that popped up throughout.

IzzysixxIzzysixxalmost 7 years ago
English

Sorry, but the language in this story is appalling, "he found myself" when referring to the narrator is such a massive turn off. Couldn't go on reading this.

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