All Comments on 'The Irreverent Reverend Ch. 04'

by gentlepuppy

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hedomanhedomanover 16 years ago
Well written.

Well written. While the storyline isn't anything new, the words and phrases you use to describe the characters inner thoughts and feelings are superior. Thanks for joining the ranks of Literotica's legion of writers. I'm looking forward to reading Chapter 5

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Been caught

Well I have been there vat least you got presentable. Erin was blowing my in car at a park when the window was knocked on. He made sure she was not in danger then told us to move alng and not come back again.

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