All Comments on 'The Island: Caroline'

One of the best I have ever read ( The Island: Caroline)

I'm looking forward to reading the others :-) good story situation building

Enjoyed your writing very much. Thank you.

Thanks for your comments! I have several more stories from The Island that I'll be publishing here over the next few weeks.

If you like The Island stories and want to read more, I also wrote a full-length e-book about Amy (the woman Caroline finds), which you can find on Smashwords. It's called Amy's Year, by Madison Barry.

I like the set up with this story. None of the girls want to be there but circumstances prevail. The text flows and is very readable. I look forward to more excerpts.

I've had requests for more about Caroline. Part 2 is now available.

Island erotica always fascinates me. This is one of the best examples. I bought Amy's year based on this episode. I liked the way you made this come alive. I could see everything as though I were seeing it with my own eyes. Yet you left enough to imagination for me to draw my own conclusions.