All Comments on 'The Kagaijin Chronicles: Tsuyoken'

Overall I thought this was a great story,but I was dissappointed that Yumi didn't find any pleasure at all duing their mating.

I thought it started off really well, but the mating seemed hurried since he didn't take his time with her. Yumi didn't get any pleasure out of it, but I'd like to see if things change in the next few chapters.

she goes to school and all but getting her life ripped apart like that, and when she closly begs him not to take her thats just rape cant say i liked it but its not my place to tell you how to write i just found it ... well not realy an enjoyable storie