All Comments on 'The Kitchen Counter'

too short

I love the way you got straight to the action. (I don't enjoy reading those 4 and 5 page long stories that give you the charaters' life histories before you get to the sex.) However, just as it was getting good, it ended. I was all ready for a full blown threesome and then...

You don't last long, do you?

(Don't pretend you are female.)

Up all night writing that were you?

I'm all for brevity, but there are limits.