by Lorino8u2
Up all night writing that were you?
I'm all for brevity, but there are limits.
You don't last long, do you?
(Don't pretend you are female.)
I love the way you got straight to the action. (I don't enjoy reading those 4 and 5 page long stories that give you the charaters' life histories before you get to the sex.) However, just as it was getting good, it ended. I was all ready for a full blown threesome and then...