All Comments on 'The Knowing Ch. 06'

Your writing is quite lovely. So much so that I'm almost glad that your posts are so far in between. There's a real thought process. Thank you sincerely. :)

It's hard to keep loving someone who won't love you back . Way past time for him to move on.

He has lived with these feelings for Santos for all these years. And it seems they haven't diminished. Gosh,what a horrible emotional state to be in.

I am so curious to read all this from Santos' POV, because she's so elusive, you just don't know what's going on inside her mind. Which makes her not quite 3-dimensional.

Thank you for the wonderful update. I love this story.

She already had one pussy, she didn't need a second one.

Easily one of the best works of writing i have had the pleasure of experiencing on Literotica. Layers upon layers of prose and character-building that you can actially peel away into separate moving parts. Looking forward to more.

I love this story so much. I read all 6 chapters tonight and you can see your growth as a writer from the first one until now. Now that I'm addicted please update in a timely manner.

Well done, I really loved it. The storyline is really interesting and has me wondering even long after I've read it. I'm a bit confused though because in part 1 you (Santos) say that the relationship ultimately ended because HE was reluctant to go public even though she initiated the initial secrecy of it all. But following Jaan's POV it appear the other way around.

Oh and please continue or conclude it. Unfinished stories are incredibly unpleasant. Especially the good ones.