All Comments on 'The Lab Pt. 02 - Aftermath'

He just accepts her infidelity once she blows him? She needs to be punished (unless she can convince him she was forced somehow) and the Prof needs some serious pain. Time to end that asshole's career.

This is romance? A finger up your ass during a blowjob?

That was pathetic.

I've had deeper and more emotionally significant conversations teasing a waitress or even with a 7-11 cashier.

Thanks for the comments.

The focus of the story is a sexual encounter so the conversation is not really developed, I agree.

Regarding the plausibility of forgiveness, I thought a lot about it. He knows something isn't right and will try to investigate and get even in the next episode.

the husband needs to grow a pair.

the wife needs to figure out whether she is married or not.

this story needs to be in the Loving Wives category.

There is nothing romantic about cheating, cuckolding, and betrayal!

but your translation of it isn't very good. It's like part 2 has little relationship to part 1. There seems to be whole areas missing.

This is also NOT a romance story. It would fit better in Loving Wives or better yet in non-consent (assuming this is where it's headed) 2*

How this could be a romance. The way it is written the wife matter of factly is fucking the professor,hubby knows, yet she shows as much emotion towards him as a typical upper class brit with a pole up its ass.This kind of reminds me of the writing of Camus in the stranger,the wife and husband are like existential zombies. You need to express emotion,unless the characters are on lithium it makes no sense..no anger,no tears,no desperation on her part,and no communication....what husband would take it if his wife said I am fucking my professor,going to continue doing it,but hey I love...

For a reconciliation story there neEd's to be conflict and drama,passion and anger,these two are like watching the whose afraid of virginia wolf played by pod people from attack of thr body snatchers.

It is a shame,because the story has the bones to be something better,the writing/wordsmithing is decent,it is just the emotion that is lacking...try putting yourself in your characters place and imagine how you would feel and write it. I sincery am not trying to be mean,I want to help you.

WHY the fuck is this in ROMANCE?! It is anything but romance and the fact shes cheating on him, but claims the baby is his, he just accepts that? BULLSHIT!!! 1* for being in the WRONG category.

Thank you again for all the comments. I will certainly change the "romance" classification. I started writing as I imagined the scenes of sexual interaction and I wanted to convey them in a way that would excite the reader. I have several more chapters in the work, will try to add more emotion to them...

just no.

FUCK NO!

That was pretty damn silly. It's a definite no.

This story makes no sense. How can she just not stop with the professor and take action. Another dumb slut wife wimp husband story

The check is in the mail, I only love you...that is 3 strikes and in baseball that means you are out!

Pure crap simply worthless.

Just doesn’t make any sense. What is wrong with both of your MCs? Is she just a mindless slut and he a spineless wimp?