All Comments on 'The Lake'

This is a great love story.

This is my first time sharing any of my stories with the public- normally my bf is the recipient/guinea pig. I'm glad u liked it... for the rest of the readers- please vote and leave feedback if u like. I'm a newbie that gets off on positive comments. ;)

you've created a lovely start to your story. It's good to get invited into a story about an already established relationship. Cuedos for the dread locks, not all hair has to be straight to be beautiful. Nik chose a very enchanting setting to declare his commitment and love to Kali. I'd like to hear more about how they feel as they explore each others bodies, including their snapshots of reflections. This is definitely a story I'll keep reading as you submit new chapters.

This looks like the beginning of a beautiful story. Congrats!!

Five.

Beautiful!

I thought it was just going to be a story of sex sex and more sex but the last couple of paragraphs changed that a lovely tale of love and commitment . Well done. I realize I come to this tale a bit late in the day a nd know nothing of your stories but on this showing hoping for more.