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Click here"Shh," he said again, holding her hand in his. "I know I'll be okay without you, but I also know that I don't want to be without you. I can't see myself with anyone else but you. I want you to be happy, and I want to be the one who makes you happy. I want to make a life for us together. Will you let me?" Kali felt her head swimming, and realized it was because she wasn't breathing. She took a deep breath, and sat up. She looked at him, holding his gaze and seeing in his eyes the feelings that he struggled so hard to put into words. She leaned towards him and cupped his face gently in her hands, her hair falling like a dark curtain around them, blocking out the world till it was just the two of them. "Yes," she whispered as she brushed her lips against his. "Yes."
I thought it was just going to be a story of sex sex and more sex but the last couple of paragraphs changed that a lovely tale of love and commitment . Well done. I realize I come to this tale a bit late in the day a nd know nothing of your stories but on this showing hoping for more.
This looks like the beginning of a beautiful story. Congrats!!
you've created a lovely start to your story. It's good to get invited into a story about an already established relationship. Cuedos for the dread locks, not all hair has to be straight to be beautiful. Nik chose a very enchanting setting to declare his commitment and love to Kali. I'd like to hear more about how they feel as they explore each others bodies, including their snapshots of reflections. This is definitely a story I'll keep reading as you submit new chapters.