All Comments on 'The Lake House Pt. 01'

It's an ok start. But a One Page Chapter sucks!! I highly recommend holding off your excitement until you get several pages together. Myself, and many Lit readers won't waste our time one page at a time.

Is it me or do I see a three way happening.

is around 3750 words. This is 2600. Assuming the next two sections are similiar posting the whole thing at once wouldn't be a problem., I know they look long in word or whatever you use but once they're posted they seldom make 2 even three pages here. I just finished reading a 6 page story that would be 20k words.

As for the story you spent your time setting up a sex scene at the lake. So what. The characters displayed little or no emotion so there is no reason to suspect anything happening. So what's the point of reading on? Where's the drama, where's the hook that would bring the reader back?